Plan for “Abduction” script:
Concepts:
Satanism
Abduction
Buried alive
Maddison – main girl
Ethel and Harrison lead satanists
Married couple
Sacrifice a girl
Character profiles:
Maddison – 5”10, shoulder length unnatural blonde hair, bright blue eyes, in her work uniform, blue nurse outfit, works at a hospital, 2AM when she gets home from work, optimistic, determined, intelligent, has medical expertise as she is training to become a doctor.
Ethel – 5”6, wife to Harrison. Satanist. 56 years old, crooked teeth popping out of her lips. Wearing a black and red robe, matching to Harrison. Scraggly brown hair with grey roots. A mole on her face, deep wrinkles, looks like carving in her face, old healed scars on her face, blood dripping from her mouth
Harrison – 6”3, husband to Ethel. Satanist. 60 years old, grey/white hair, matching outfit to Ethel, thin angry lips, thick low long grey eyebrows.
Isabelle – 5”7, gets killed by Harrison. Long messy matted ginger hair, fresh scars on her face, dry lips, weak, bruises across her body, clothes are ripped, not much of them left.
Story outline:
Maddison is buried alive at the end when she nearly escapes
Neighbour of Satanists – she hears screaming and unsettling cackling laughter
Investigates noise
Sees a satantical sacrifice through back window
Tried to call police but phone is dead
Ethel and Harrison see Madison through the window and try to find where she is
Maddison trips over a water pipe as she tries to run back to her house- creates loads of noise
Hurt her ankle so is now limping
She hears someone shouting for help from the open garage at the front of the house
She enters the garage to find a crying woman covered in blood stuck in a locker
Maddison finds bolt cutters and breaks open the locker freeing the woman
She says she knows what’s going on- as she starts explaining she is in the head
Maddison runs inside the house through the garage to avoid Harrison
Limps into the kitchen to try and find a weapon
Ethel jumps out of nowhere and slashes Maddison’s arm with a hunting knife
Maddison throws a potted plant at Ethels head leaving her dazed and confused
Maddison tries to leave through the back garden door, all the doors are locked and barricaded shut
Maddison runs upstairs and locks herself in the bathroom
She smashes the mirror with a brick candle holder, uses the glass as a weapon.
Maddison rips the rest of her sleeve off where the slash is and wraps it around the glass she she can use it as a weapon
Ethel and Harrison are taunting her outside the bathroom door, they know she can’t escape out the bathroom because of her injuries
Maddison uses iodine on her stab wound in her stomach and keeps pressure I’m it with a bathroom towel
Maddison has one hand keeping pressure on the wound and the other carrying the shattered glass weapon.
Ethel and Harrison can be heard downstairs so Maddison sneaks out the bathroom and goes downstairs.
Ethel goes outside but Harrison is in the living room with his back to the entrance from the hall way
Maddison creeps up behind him and stabs him in the neck letting him bleed out on the floor
She hears satanic whispering surround her talking to her as she realises she killed Harrison in the middle of a satanic circle made out of someone’s blood
Maddison runs away from the noise after finding the key to the back garden door in his pocket
She unlocks the door and starts to run out
Ethel comes out of the corner and stabs Maddison in the stomach killing her
POV shot from Maddison of eternity standing over her
She offers her eternal life if she joins satan
Maddison accepts as she can still hear the whisperings getting louder as she bleeds out
Ethel than carries Maddison’s body over shoulder and throws her into a deep dug out gravehole
Ethel burries Maddison alive – while telling her she has the gift of eternal life through Satan
Maddison will forever be buried alive
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